1) LA - Send a copy of your Fall write to your Evernote account before you make any changes. The doc you send needs to contain all the feedback I have given to you. Please see your gmail for instructions of how to move the doc to Evernote.
2) LA - revise your Fall write according to my feedback. Print off the revision, your final best work for Wednesday. Please email me if you need further clarification, or if you would like further feedback once you have revised.